5/31/2018 4 Comments Pale Blue DotThat Pale Blue Dot isn't just any Pale Blue Dot, it's our Pale Blue Dot. On it everyone you love, every one you know, everyone you ever heard of, every human being who ever was, lived out their lives. Only on this one Pale Blue Dot, you may think the world is big, but the universe is bigger, with one lonely Pale Blue Dot. Just like us people lost in a big world, bigger than we think. This world contains every ones most valuable possession, family and friends. This Pale Blue Dot may seem small to you, but it has a big heart to hold you and your loved ones. You see, this Pale Blue Dot has created all of history. Soon you will become part of that history and will always be remembered, just like our Pale Blue Dot.
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Lilian
5/31/2018 01:39:38 pm
Love your paragraph, it was well written although some words were misspelled. You put on some words just to write about a Pale Blue Dot its still amazing how you wrote about what you thought of the Pale Blue Dot and what you think what's going to happen in the next years.
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Mia
5/31/2018 05:44:05 pm
This is very well written! I agree that the Pale Blue Dot has created a lot of history, but how will we be remembered and become a part of that history?
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Katrina Dumlao
6/13/2018 10:09:12 am
Your paragraph is very well written, i like how you included humans with their loves ones. However, some of the words are missing apostrophes. But, anyways, i love your paragraph!
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Twinkle
6/14/2018 06:29:48 pm
I thought this was a very well-written paragraph about our “pale blue dot” I specifically loved “you may think the world is big, but the universe is bigger” because that gave me a true understanding of what you were trying to say.
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